I was really intrigued by this book. I wanted to know more about the lifestyle of BDSM. I wanted to see if this would be something I would want to try. Especially since it was a Lesbian erotic novel which I barely see much of. I did like the “scene” they did, very steamy, but if felt the characters were a little flat. Kinda like the dialogue in a porn before they get down to business. (I usually fast forward through that part to get to the juicy parts) There was too much up and down with the character's emotions that I didn’t feel it being realistic. A friend training the main character to submit more to get her girlfriend back? Didn’t make too much sense. Felt like the author was making it go in so many directions that it really didn’t go straight to the point. Some of the chapters were very steamy, but some were too flat to really feel for the characters. Maybe too much plot and not enough emotion to feel for the characters.
I received an advanced review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Hi Jenna! Thank you so much for this honest review of my book! I truly appreciate getting reviews of this nature because they really help me to improve my writing! Thank you so much for being kind and considerate in how you critiqued this as well! It can be difficult to read constructive criticism, but this is exactly the kind of criticism that helps an author out! Thank you so much,
ReplyDeleteAuthor Mistress Black Rose